I did some substantial (at least to me) revisions and polishing to this, and decided to re-submit it. I wanted to do this idea as much justice as I could. It also takes care of undesired commentary.
The mice are intentionally gender-neutral, I wanted the viewer and myself to see any roles they wanted. Interestingly, I started out with one idea for their roles in mind, and had a completely new one by the time I finished.
I prefer comments to favorites but I appreciate both.